Institutio Oratoria

Quintilian

Quintilian. Institutio Oratoria, Volume 1-4. Butler, Harold Edgeworth, translator. Cambridge, Mass; London: Harvard University Press, William Heinemann Ltd., 1920-1922.

And we shall secure the vividness we seek, if only our descriptions give the impression of truth, nay, we may even add fictitious incidents of the type which commonly occur. The same vivid impression may be produced

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also by the mention of the accidents of each situation:
  1. Chill shudderings shake my limbs
  2. And all my blood is curdled cold with fear;
Aen. iii. 29
or
  1. And trembling mothers clasped
  2. Their children to their breast.
Aen. vii. 518.
Though the attainment of such effects is,

in my opinion, the highest of all oratorical gifts, it is far from difficult of attainment. Fix your eyes on nature and follow her. All eloquence is concerned with the activities of life, while every man applies to himself what he hears from others, and the mind is always readiest to accept what it recognises to be true to nature.

The invention of similes has also provided an admirable means of illuminating our descriptions. Some of these are designed for insertion among our arguments to help our proof, while others are devised to make our pictures yet more vivid; it is with this latter class of simile that I am now specially concerned. The following are good examples:—

  1. Thence like fierce wolves beneath the cloud of night,
Aen. ii. 355.
or
  1. Like the bird that flies
  2. Around the shore and the fish-haunted reef,
  3. Skimming the deep.
Aen. iv. 254.

In employing this form of ornament we must be especially careful that the subject chosen for our simile is neither obscure nor unfamiliar: for anything that is selected for the purpose of illuminating

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something else must itself be clearer than that which it is designed to illustrate. Therefore while we may permit poets to employ such similes as:—
  1. As when Apollo wintry Lycia leaves,
  2. And Xanthus' streams, or visits Delos' isle,
  3. His mother's home,
Aen. iv. 143.
it would be quite unsuitable for an orator to illustrate something quite plain by such obscure allusions.