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                    <TEI xmlns="http://www.tei-c.org/ns/1.0"><text xml:lang="eng"><body><div n="urn:cts:latinLit:phi1002.phi001.perseus-eng2" type="translation" xml:lang="eng"><div n="10" type="textpart" subtype="book"><div n="4" type="textpart" subtype="chapter"><div n="1" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> The next point which we have to consider is the correction of our work,
                            which is by far the most useful portion of our study: for there is good
                            reason for the view that erasure is quite as important a <pb n="v10-12 p.111"/> function of the pen as actual writing. Correction
                            takes the form of addition, excision and alteration. But it is a
                            comparatively simple and easy task to decide what is to be added or
                            excised. On the other hand, to prune what is turgid, to elevate what is
                            mean, to repress exuberance, arrange what is disorderly, introduce
                            rhythm where it is lacking, and modify it where it is too emphatic,
                            involves a twofold labour. For we have to condemn what had previously
                            satisfied us and discover what had escaped our notice. </p></div><div n="2" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> There can be no doubt that the best method of correction is to put aside
                            what we have written for a certain time, so that when we return to it
                            after an interval it will have the air of novelty and of being another's
                            handiwork; for thus we may prevent ourselves from regarding our writings
                            with all the affection that we lavish on a newborn child. </p></div><div n="3" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> But this is not always possible, especially in the case of an orator who
                            most frequently has to write for immediate use, while some limit, after
                            all, must be set to correction. For there are some who return to
                            everything they write with the presumption that it is full of faults
                            and, assuming that a first draft must necessarily be incorrect, think
                            every change an improvement and make some alteration as often as they
                            have the manuscript in their hands: they are, in fact, like doctors who
                            use the knife even where the flesh is perfectly healthy. The result of
                            their critical activities is that the finished work is full of scars,
                            bloodless, and all the worse for their anxious care. </p></div></div></div></div></body></text></TEI>
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