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                    <TEI xmlns="http://www.tei-c.org/ns/1.0"><text xml:lang="eng"><body><div n="urn:cts:latinLit:phi1002.phi001.perseus-eng2" type="translation" xml:lang="eng"><div n="10" type="textpart" subtype="book"><div n="3" type="textpart" subtype="chapter"><div n="18" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> The more correct method is, therefore, to exercise care from the very
                            beginning, and to form the work from the outset in such a manner that it
                            merely requires to be chiselled into shape, not fashioned anew.
                            Sometimes, however, we must follow the stream of our emotions, since
                            their warmth will give us more than any diligence can secure. </p></div><div n="19" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> The condemnation which I have passed on such carelessness in writing
                            will make it pretty clear what my views are on the luxury of dictation
                            which is now so fashionable. For, when we write, however great our
                            speed, the fact that the hand cannot follow the rapidity of our thoughts
                            gives us time to think, <pb n="v10-12 p.103"/> whereas the presence of our
                            amanuensis hurries us on, and at times we feel ashamed to hesitate or
                            pause, or make some alteration, as though we were afraid to display such
                            weakness before a witness. </p></div><div n="20" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> As a result our language tends not merely to be haphazard and formless,
                            but in our desire to produce a continuous flow we let slip positive
                            improprieties of diction, which show neither the precision of the writer
                            nor the impetuosity of the speaker. Again, if the amanuensis is a slow
                            writer, or lacking in intelligence, he becomes a stumbling-block, our
                            speed is checked, and the thread of our ideas is interrupted by the
                            delay or even perhaps by the loss of temper to which it gives rise. </p></div><div n="21" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> Moreover, the gestures which accompany strong feeling, and sometimes
                            even serve to stimulate the mind, the waving of the hand, the
                            contraction of the brow, the occasional striking of forehead or side,
                            and those which Persius <note anchored="true" place="unspecified">i.
                                106.</note> notes when he describes a trivial style as one that
                                <quote rend="blockquote"><l part="N"><quote>Thumps not the desk nor
                                        smacks of bitten nails,</quote></l></quote> all these become
                            ridiculous, unless we are alone, Finally, </p></div><div n="22" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> we come to the most important consideration of all, that the advantages
                            of privacy are lost when we dictate. Everyone, however, will agree that
                            the absence of company and deep silence are most conducive to writing,
                            though I would not go so far as to concur in the opinion of those who
                            think woods and groves the most suitable localities for the purpose, on
                            the ground that the freedom of the sky and the charm of the surroundings
                            produce sublimity of thought and wealth of inspiration. </p></div><div n="23" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> Personally I regard such an environment as a <pb n="v10-12 p.105"/>
                            pleasant luxury rather than a stimulus to study. For whatever causes us
                            delight, must necessarily distract us from the concentration due to our
                            work. The mind cannot devote its undivided and sincere attention to a
                            number of things at the same time, and wherever it turns its gaze it
                            must cease to contemplate its appointed task. </p></div><div n="24" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> Therefore, the charm of the woods, the gliding of the stream, the breeze
                            that murmurs in the branches, the song of birds, and the very freedom
                            with which our eyes may range, are mere distractions, and in my opinion
                            the pleasure which they excite is more likely to relax than to
                            concentrate our attention. </p></div><div n="25" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> Demosthenes took a wiser view; for he would retire to a place <note anchored="true" place="unspecified"> An underground room. See Plut.
                                    <hi rend="italic">Dem.</hi> vii. </note> where no voice was to
                            be heard, and no prospect greeted the sight, for fear that his eyes
                            might force his mind to neglect its duty. Therefore, let the burner of
                            the midnight oil seclude himself in the silence of night, within closed
                            doors, with but a solitary lamp to light his labours. </p></div><div n="26" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> But for every kind of study, and more especially for night work, good
                            health and its chief source, simple living, are essential; for we have
                            fallen into the habit of devoting to relentless labour the hour which
                            nature has appointed for rest and relaxation. From those hours we must
                            take only such time as is superfluous for sleep, and will not be missed.
                        </p></div><div n="27" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> For fatigue will make us careless in writing, and the hours of daylight
                            are amply sufficient for one who has no other distractions. It is only
                            the busy man who is driven to encroach on the hours of darkness.
                            Nevertheless, night work, so long as we come to it fiesh and untired,
                            provides by far the best form of privacy. <pb n="v10-12 p.107"/>
                     </p></div><div n="28" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> But although silence and seclusion and absolute freedom of mind are
                            devoutly to be desired, they are not always within our power to attain.
                            Consequently we must not fling aside our book at once, if disturbed by
                            some noise, and lament that we have lost a day: on the contrary, we must
                            make a firm stand against such inconveniences, and train ourselves so to
                            concentrate our thoughts as to rise superior to all impediments to
                            study. If only you direct all your attention to the work which you have
                            in hand, no sight or sound will ever penetrate to your mind. </p></div><div n="29" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> If even casual thoughts often occupy us to such an extent that we do not
                            see passers-by, or even stray from our path, surely we can obtain the
                            same result by the exercise of our will. We must not give way to
                            pretexts for sloth. For unless we make up our mind that we must be
                            fresh, cheerful and free from all other care when we approach our
                            studies, we shall always find some excuse for idleness. </p></div><div n="30" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> Therefore, whether we be in a crowd, on a journey, or even at some
                            festive gathering, our thoughts should always have some inner sanctuary
                            of their own to which they may retire. Otherwise what shall we do when
                            we are suddenly called upon to deliver a set speech in the midst of the
                            forum, with lawsuits in progress on every side, and with the sound of
                            quarrels and even casual outcries in our ears, if we need absolute
                            privacy to discover the thoughts which we jot down upon our tablets? It
                            was for this reason that Demosthenes, the passionate lover of seclusion,
                            used to study on the seashore amid the roar of the breakers that they
                            might teach him not to be unnerved by the uproar of the public assembly.
                        </p></div><div n="31" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> There are also certain minor details which deserve <pb n="v10-12 p.109"/>
                            our attention, for there is nothing too minute for the student. It is
                            best to write on wax owing to the facility which it offers for erasure,
                            though weak sight may make it desirable to employ parchment by
                            preference. The latter, however, although of assistance to the eye,
                            delays the hand and interrupts the stream of thought owing to the
                            frequency with which the pen has to be supplied with ink. </p></div><div n="32" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> But whichever we employ, we must leave blank pages that we may be free
                            to make additions when we will. For lack of space at times gives rise to
                            a reluctance to make corrections, or, at any rate, is liable to cause
                            confusion when new matter is inserted. The wax tablets should not be
                            unduly wide; for I have known a young and over-zealous student write his
                            compositions at undue length, because he measured them by the number of
                            lines, a fault which persisted, in spite of frequent admonition, until
                            his tablets were changed, when it disappeared. </p></div><div n="33" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> Space must also be left for jotting down the thoughts which occur to the
                            writer out of due order, that is to say, which refer to subjects other
                            than those in hand. For sometimes the most admirable thoughts break in
                            upon us which cannot be inserted in what we are writing, but which, on
                            the other hand, it is unsafe to put by, since they are at times
                            forgotten, and at times cling to the memory so persistently as to divert
                            us from some other line of thought. They are, therefore, best kept in
                            store. </p></div></div><div n="4" type="textpart" subtype="chapter"><div n="1" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> The next point which we have to consider is the correction of our work,
                            which is by far the most useful portion of our study: for there is good
                            reason for the view that erasure is quite as important a <pb n="v10-12 p.111"/> function of the pen as actual writing. Correction
                            takes the form of addition, excision and alteration. But it is a
                            comparatively simple and easy task to decide what is to be added or
                            excised. On the other hand, to prune what is turgid, to elevate what is
                            mean, to repress exuberance, arrange what is disorderly, introduce
                            rhythm where it is lacking, and modify it where it is too emphatic,
                            involves a twofold labour. For we have to condemn what had previously
                            satisfied us and discover what had escaped our notice. </p></div><div n="2" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> There can be no doubt that the best method of correction is to put aside
                            what we have written for a certain time, so that when we return to it
                            after an interval it will have the air of novelty and of being another's
                            handiwork; for thus we may prevent ourselves from regarding our writings
                            with all the affection that we lavish on a newborn child. </p></div><div n="3" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> But this is not always possible, especially in the case of an orator who
                            most frequently has to write for immediate use, while some limit, after
                            all, must be set to correction. For there are some who return to
                            everything they write with the presumption that it is full of faults
                            and, assuming that a first draft must necessarily be incorrect, think
                            every change an improvement and make some alteration as often as they
                            have the manuscript in their hands: they are, in fact, like doctors who
                            use the knife even where the flesh is perfectly healthy. The result of
                            their critical activities is that the finished work is full of scars,
                            bloodless, and all the worse for their anxious care. </p></div><div n="4" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> No! let there be something in all our writing which, if it does not
                            actually please us, at least passes muster, so that the file may only
                            polish our work, not wear it away. There must <pb n="v10-12 p.113"/> also
                            be a limit to the time which we spend on its revision. For the fact that
                            Cinna <note anchored="true" place="unspecified"> C. Helvius Cinna, the
                                friend of Catullus. The Smyrna was a short but exceptionally obscure
                                and learned epic. </note> took nine years to write his Smyrna, and
                            that Isocrates required ten years, at the lowest estimate, to complete
                            his Panegyric does not concern the orator, whose assistance will be of
                            no use, if it is so long delayed. </p></div></div></div></div></body></text></TEI>
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