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                    <TEI xmlns="http://www.tei-c.org/ns/1.0"><text xml:lang="eng"><body><div n="urn:cts:latinLit:phi1002.phi001.perseus-eng2" type="translation" xml:lang="eng"><div n="8" type="textpart" subtype="book"><div n="3" type="textpart" subtype="chapter"><div n="51" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> The latter, though not avoided with special care even by the best
                            authors, may sometimes be regarded as a fault: it is, in fact, a blemish
                            into which Cicero not infrequently falls through indifference to such
                            minor details: take, for example, the following passage, <note anchored="true" place="unspecified"><hi rend="italic">Pro
                                    Cluent.</hi> xxxv. 96. To bring out the effect criticised by
                                Cicero, <hi rend="italic">iudicium</hi> must he translated
                                    <quote>judgment.</quote> But <quote>trial</quote> is required to
                                give the correct sense. <foreign xml:lang="grc">ἐπανάληψις</foreign>
                                = repetition. </note>
                        <quote>Judges, this judgment was not merely
                                unlike a judgment.</quote> It is sometimes given another name,
                                <foreign xml:lang="grc">ἐπανάληψις,</foreign> under which
                            appellation it is ranked among figures, of which I shall give examples
                            when I come to the discussion of stylistic virtues. <note anchored="true" place="unspecified">IX. ii.</note>
                     </p></div><div n="52" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> A worse fault is <foreign xml:lang="grc">ὁμοείδεια,</foreign> or
                            sameness, a term applied to a style which has no variety to relieve its
                            tedium, and which presents a uniform monotony of hue. This is one of the
                            surest signs of lack of art, and produces a uniquely unpleasing effect,
                            not merely on the mind, but on the ear, on account of its <pb n="v7-9 p.241"/> sameness of thought, the uniformity of its figures,
                            and the monotony of its structure. </p></div><div n="53" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> We must also avoid <hi rend="italic">macrology,</hi> that is, the
                            employment of more words than are necessary, as, for instance, in the
                            sentence of Livy, <quote>The ambassadors, having failed to obtain peace,
                                went back home, whence they had come.</quote>
                        <note anchored="true" place="unspecified"><hi rend="italic">Fr.</hi> 62, <hi rend="italic">Hertz.</hi>
                        </note> On the other hand, <hi rend="italic">periphrasis,</hi> which is akin to this blemish, is regarded as a
                            virtue. Another fault is <hi rend="italic">pleonasm,</hi> when we
                            overload our style with a superfluity of words, as in the phrase,
                                <quote>I saw it with my eyes,</quote> where <quote>I saw it</quote>
                            would have been sufficient. </p></div><div n="54" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> Cicero passed a witty comment on a fault of this kind in a declamation
                            of Hirtius when he said that a child had been carried for ten months in
                            his mother's womb. <quote>Oh,</quote> he said, <quote>I suppose other
                                women carry them in their bags.</quote>
                        <note anchored="true" place="unspecified"><hi rend="italic">perulra</hi> means <quote>a
                                    small wallet.</quote> But it is noteworthy that in Apul. <hi rend="italic">Met.</hi> V. xiv. it is used <hi rend="italic">=
                                    uterus,</hi> and the <hi rend="italic">doubleentendre</hi> was
                                probably current in Cicero's time. </note> Sometimes, however, the
                            form of pleonasm, of which I have just given an example, may have a
                            pleasing effect when employed for the sake of emphasis, as in the
                            Virgilian phrase <note anchored="true" place="unspecified"><hi rend="italic">Aen.</hi> iv- 359. </note> : <quote rend="blockquote"><quote><l part="N">With mine own ears his voice I
                                        heard.</l></quote></quote> But whenever the addition is not
                            deliberate, </p></div><div n="55" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> but merely tame and redundant, it must be regarded as a fault. There is
                            also a fault entitled <foreign xml:lang="grc">περιεργία,</foreign> which
                            I may perhaps translate by superfluous elaboration, which differs from
                            its corresponding virtue much as fussiness differs from industry, and
                            superstition from religion. Finally, every word which neither helps the
                            sense nor the style may be regarded as faulty. </p></div><div n="56" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p><hi rend="italic">Cacozelia,</hi> or perverse affectation, is a fault in
                            every kind of style: for it includes all that is turgid, trivial,
                            luscious, redundant, far-fetched or extravagant, while the same name is
                            also applied to virtues <pb n="v7-9 p.243"/> carried to excess, when the
                            mind loses its critical sense and is misled by the false appearance of
                            beauty, the worst of all offences against style, since other faults are
                            due to carelessness, but this is deliberate. </p></div><div n="57" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> This form of affectation, however, affects style alone. For the
                            employment of arguments which might equally well be advanced by the
                            other side, or are foolish, inconsistent or superfluous, are all faults
                            of matter, whereas corruption of style is revealed in the employment of
                            improper or redundant words, in obscurity of meaning, effeminacy of
                            rhythm, or in the childish search for similar or ambiguous expressions.
                        </p></div><div n="58" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> Further, it always involves insincerity, even though all insincerity
                            does not imply affectation. For it consists in saying something in an
                            unnatural or unbecoming or superfluous manner. Style may, however, be
                            corrupted in precisely the same number of ways that it may be adorned.
                            But I have discussed this subject at greater length in another work,
                                <note anchored="true" place="unspecified"> The lost <hi rend="italic">De causis corruptae eloquentiae.</hi>
                        </note> and
                            have frequently called attention to it in this, while I shall have
                            occasion to mention it continually in the remaining books. For in
                            dealing with ornament, I shall occasionally speak of faults which have
                            to be avoided, but which are hard to distinguish from virtues. </p></div><div n="59" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> To these blemishes may be added faulty arrangement or <foreign xml:lang="grc">ἀνοικονόμητον,</foreign> the faulty use of figures or
                                <foreign xml:lang="grc">ἀσχημάτιστον,</foreign> and the faulty
                            collocation of words or <foreign xml:lang="grc">κακοσύνθετον.</foreign>
                            But, as I have already discussed arrangement, I will confine myself to
                            the consideration of figures and structure. There is also a fault known
                            as <foreign xml:lang="grc">Σαρδισμὸς,</foreign> which consists in the
                            indiscriminate use of several different dialects, as, for instance,
                            would result from mixing Doric, Ionic, and <pb n="v7-9 p.245"/> even
                            Aeolic words with Attic. </p></div><div n="60" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> A similar fault is found amongst ourselves, consisting in the
                            indiscriminate mixture of grand words with mean, old with new, and
                            poetic with colloquial, the result being a monstrous medley like that
                            described by Horace in the opening portion of his <hi rend="italic">Ars
                                poetica,</hi>
                        <note anchored="true" place="unspecified"><hi rend="italic">A. P. I.</hi></note>
                        <quote rend="blockquote"><quote><l part="F">If a painter choose</l><l part="N">To
                                        place a man's head on a horse's neck,</l></quote></quote>
                            and, be proceeds to say, should add other limbs from different animals.
                        </p></div><div n="61" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> The ornate is something that goes beyond what is merely lucid and
                            acceptable. It consists firstly in forming a clear conception of what we
                            wish to say, secondly in giving this adequate expression, and thirdly in
                            lending it additional brilliance, a process which may correctly be
                            termed embellishment. Consequently we must place among ornaments that
                                <foreign xml:lang="grc">ἐνάργεια</foreign> which I mentioned in the
                            rules which I laid down for the statement of facts, <note anchored="true" place="unspecified"><milestone n="4" unit="chapter"/><milestone n="1" unit="section"/> ii. 63. </note> because
                            vivid illustration, or, as some prefer to call it, representation, is
                            something more than mere clearness, since the latter merely lets itself
                            be seen, whereas the former thrusts itself upon our notice. </p></div><div n="62" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> It is a great gift to be able to set forth the facts on which we are
                            speaking clearly and vividly. For oratory fails of its full effect, and
                            does not assert itself as it should, if its appeal is merely to the
                            hearing, and if the judge merely feels that the facts on which he has to
                            give his decision are being narrated to him, and not displayed in their
                            living truth to the eyes of the mind. </p></div><div n="63" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> But since different views have been held with regard to this art of
                            representation, I shall not attempt to divide it into <pb n="v7-9 p.247"/> all its different departments, whose number is ostentatiously
                            multiplied by certain writers, but shall content myself with touching on
                            those which appear to me to be absolutely necessary. There is, then, to
                            begin with, one form of vividness which consists in giving an actual
                            word-picture of a scene, as in the passage beginning, <quote rend="blockquote"><quote><l part="N"> Forthwith each hero tiptoe
                                        stood erect. <note anchored="true" place="unspecified"><hi rend="italic">Aen.</hi> v. 426.
                                </note>
                              </l></quote></quote> Other details follow which give us such
                            a picture of the two boxers confronting each other for the fight, that
                            it could not have been clearer had we been actual spectators. </p></div><div n="64" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> Cicero is supreme in this department, as in others. Is there anybody so
                            incapable of forming a mental picture of a scene that, when he reads the
                            following passage from the Verrines, <note anchored="true" place="unspecified">v. xxxiii. 86.</note> he does not seem not
                            merely to see the actors in the scene, the place itself and their very
                            dress, but even to imagine to himself other details that the orator does
                            not describe? <quote> There on the shore stood the praetor, the
                                representative of the Roman people, with slippered feet, robed in a
                                purple cloak, a tunic streaming to his heels, and leaning on the arm
                                of this worthless woman. </quote>
                     </p></div><div n="65" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> For my own part, I seem to see before my eyes his face, his eyes, the
                            unseemly blandishments of himself and his paramour, the silent loathing
                            and frightened shame of those who viewed the scene. </p></div><div n="66" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> At times, again, the picture which we endeavour to present is fuller in
                            detail, as, for example, in the following description of a luxurious
                            banquet, which is also from Cicero, <note anchored="true" place="unspecified"> From the lost <hi rend="italic">pro
                                    Gallio.</hi>
                        </note> since he by himself is capable of supplying
                            admirable examples of every kind of oratorical ornament: <quote> I
                                seemed to see some entering, some leaving the room, <pb n="v7-9 p.249"/> some reeling under the influence of the wine,
                                others yawning with yesterday's potations. The floor was foul with
                                wine-smears, covered with wreaths half-withered and littered with
                                fishbones. </quote>
                     </p></div><div n="67" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> What more would any man have seen who had actually entered the room? So,
                            too, we may move our hearers to tears by the picture of a captured town.
                            For the mere statement that the town was stormed, while no doubt it
                            embraces all that such a calamity involves, has all the curtness of a
                            dispatch, and fails to penetrate to the emotions of the hearer. </p></div><div n="68" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> But if we expand all that the one word <quote>stormed</quote> includes,
                            we shall see the flames pouring from house and temple, and hear the
                            crash of falling roofs and one confused clamour blent of many cries: we
                            shall behold some in doubt whither to fly, others clinging to their
                            nearest and dearest in one last embrace, while the wailing of women and
                            children and the laments of old men that the cruelty of fate should have
                            spared them to see that day will strike upon our ears. </p></div><div n="69" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> Then will come the pillage of treasure sacred and profane, the hurrying
                            to and fro of the plunderers as they carry off their booty or return to
                            seek for more, the prisoners driven each before his own inhuman captor,
                            the mother struggling to keep her child, and the victors fighting over
                            the richest of the spoil. For though, as I have already said, the sack
                            of a city includes all these things, it is less effective to tell the
                            whole news at once than to recount it detail by detail. </p></div><div n="70" type="textpart" subtype="section"><p> And we shall secure the vividness we seek, if only our descriptions give
                            the impression of truth, nay, we may even add fictitious incidents of
                            the type which commonly occur. The same vivid impression may be produced
                                <pb n="v7-9 p.251"/> also by the mention of the <hi rend="italic">accidents</hi> of each situation: <quote rend="blockquote"><cit><quote><l part="F">Chill shudderings shake my limbs</l><l part="N">And all my blood is curdled cold with
                                        fear;</l></quote><bibl default="false"><hi rend="italic">Aen.</hi> iii. 29
                                    </bibl></cit></quote> or <quote rend="blockquote"><cit><quote><l part="F">And trembling mothers clasped</l><l part="N">Their children to their breast.</l></quote><bibl default="false"><hi rend="italic">Aen.</hi> vii. 518.
                                    </bibl></cit></quote> Though the attainment of such effects is, </p></div></div></div></div></body></text></TEI>
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